From 8845be719dcec81d8d0ac82d26ceef8ac99aabb5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: gsovereignty <gsovereignty@proton.me>
Date: Wed, 14 Aug 2024 17:05:01 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] problem: wording not great

---
 src/views/n00b/N00b.svelte | 30 +++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/views/n00b/N00b.svelte b/src/views/n00b/N00b.svelte
index e2ae5f3..57caf9d 100644
--- a/src/views/n00b/N00b.svelte
+++ b/src/views/n00b/N00b.svelte
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 			<Card.Root class="max-w-80">
 				<Card.Header>
 					<Card.Title>Proof of Work</Card.Title>
-					<Card.Description>I have skills and I'm ready to work for sats.</Card.Description>
+					<Card.Description>I want to work for sats</Card.Description>
 				</Card.Header>
 				<img src="{base}/_work.png" />
 				<Card.Content class="grid gap-4">
@@ -35,12 +35,12 @@
 						<ul class="ml-6 list-disc [&>li]:mt-2">
 							<li>Solve problems for fun and profit</li>
 							<li>No meetings, no scrum, no task assignment, no schedules</li>
-							<li>Work only on what inspires you</li>
+							<li>Only work on fully open source projects</li>
 							<li>
-								No interview process or CV's required, apply by sending a pull request to solve a
-								small problem
+								No interview process! Apply by choosing a problem to solve and sending a pull
+								request
 							</li>
-							<li>Get paid in Sats</li>
+							<li>Get paid in Sats, or equity in the project's satflow</li>
 						</ul>
 					</div>
 				</Card.Content>
@@ -58,8 +58,7 @@
 			<Card.Root class="max-w-80">
 				<Card.Header>
 					<Card.Title>Proof of Sats</Card.Title>
-					<Card.Description>I have Sats, and I want a slice of a Rocket's satflow.</Card.Description
-					>
+					<Card.Description>I want to invest in the satflow of a Rocket</Card.Description>
 				</Card.Header>
 				<img src="{base}/_sats.png" width="100%" />
 				<Card.Content class="grid gap-4">
@@ -74,10 +73,10 @@
 								solves a problem in the critical path to (more) revenue
 							</li>
 							<li>
-								Revenue goes straight from the paying customer's wallet into your wallet as an
-								equity holder
+								Nostrocket is non-custodial - revenue goes directly from the paying customer to your
+								wallet as an equity holder
 							</li>
-							<li>Non-custodial, no KYC (ever).</li>
+							<li>No KYC (ever).</li>
 						</ul>
 					</div>
 				</Card.Content>
@@ -91,7 +90,7 @@
 				<Card.Header>
 					<Card.Title>Launch a new Rocket</Card.Title>
 					<Card.Description
-						>I'm working on my own project and I want other people to join me.</Card.Description
+						>I have an open source project and I want to make it profitable</Card.Description
 					>
 				</Card.Header>
 				<img src="{base}/_rocket.png" width="100%" />
@@ -99,19 +98,16 @@
 					<div>
 						<ul class="ml-6 list-disc [&>li]:mt-2">
 							<li>
-								Attract the people you need to make your project a success (despite your lack of
+								Attract the right people to make your project a success (despite your lack of
 								funding)
 							</li>
-							<li>
-								Obsolete the need for financial accounting, capital raising, compliance, business
-								plans, etc.
-							</li>
+							<li>No financial accounting, capital raising, compliance, business plans, etc.</li>
 							<li>
 								Make your project socially scalable by becoming radically fair and meritocratic to
 								all contributors and investors.
 							</li>
 							<li>
-								Makes your project immune to parasites by giving them nowhere to hide and nothing to
+								Make your project immune to parasites by giving them nowhere to hide and nothing to
 								leech from.
 							</li>
 						</ul>